BIG agree with alex! i know you were struggling with some of the stylizing (particularly because links can be messy), but i think the game is super cohesive and really fun and engaging. i can see some real-life influences in it which makes it all the more special (technicolor smart lights???) that said, knowing that this is unfinished i think it would be nice to have a home/go back button just in case someone wants to try the different options while it's still in development. the text formatting could use a little work--just grammar and spacing.
overall i am super excited for this game and i can't wait to date some cute bird people!!!!
This game is funky and weird and it totally works. The story is interesting, you’ve imparted a lot of personality and humor. The interactivity that allows the player to click through and open lines of dialogue feels very engaging despite the game's overall simplicity. Tread carefully on your design choices, particularly colors. The blue and orange choice for links is painful on the eye and hinders legibility.Would love to see this finished one day with some fun art!
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BIG agree with alex! i know you were struggling with some of the stylizing (particularly because links can be messy), but i think the game is super cohesive and really fun and engaging. i can see some real-life influences in it which makes it all the more special (technicolor smart lights???)
that said, knowing that this is unfinished i think it would be nice to have a home/go back button just in case someone wants to try the different options while it's still in development. the text formatting could use a little work--just grammar and spacing.
overall i am super excited for this game and i can't wait to date some cute bird people!!!!
This game is funky and weird and it totally works. The story is interesting, you’ve imparted a lot of personality and humor. The interactivity that allows the player to click through and open lines of dialogue feels very engaging despite the game's overall simplicity. Tread carefully on your design choices, particularly colors. The blue and orange choice for links is painful on the eye and hinders legibility. Would love to see this finished one day with some fun art!